There were so many things I found problematic. Off the top of my head:
That Jace’s parents would send him off alone into the middle of nowhere based on the thin acquaintance Jamie struck up his Jace’s mom.
That a terrific pair of killers who are not only good but lucky, somehow are outwitted or outraced by Jace at beginning of the book. Koryta paints Jace into an inescapable corner there at the beginning, then frees him, but never do we get a clue on how Jace managed this remarkable escape. It didn’t seem so unbelievable when I first read it, but as the book went on, and I saw how good the killers were, the lack of an explanation bothered me.
SPOILER ALERT
If Jamie and her brothers were in touch regarding Jace’s whereabouts, why was it necessary for them to kill the sheriff – wouldn’t they have known to go straight to Allison for information?
What was the big rush that the killers were in – I never understood why they had to go into the mountains after Jace? Why couldn’t they wait for Ethan to bring the boys back to the ranch, then pick Jace off at long distance with a rifle?
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